Another immature attempt at poetry...
Alcohol is bad
Says who?
How much do I care?
Mix it up
Take it neat
It’s divine
Red black or blue
Colours don’t matter
I just wanna get high!
I walk in a “straight line”
I say “I’m OK”
My eyes flutter
I see everything
I hear it all
But am drunk…Cheers!
Ye poem padh kar mein itna inspire ho gya ki teri shaan mein ek sher likh daala....arz kiya hai
ReplyDeleteLog kehte hain kambakht chicken kha, meri favorite dish to kekda hai....
Log kehte hain kambakht chicken kha, meri favorite dish to kekda hai....
kekda kha ke poem likhi hai, fir mat kehna ki ghalib bewda hai
wah wah wah wah....
hic hic ...it is divine :)
ReplyDeletecheers babe!!!
goneyyy :wah wah..yaar ye sher mein PJ ko kya bolte hian???
meri taraf se bhi ek sher coz of my prev comment to goneyy
ReplyDeletegoneyy aur 'yaar'? ..naaa
hamare beech hai 'cold war'
TAG ka sahara lekar
kiya hai isne hum per ghrahanit prahaar!!!
lol lol lol
ReplyDelete@ ur poem, sidz comment & icing on d cake...geetz comment :P
tum teeno ne kya kaha hai...wah wah wah wah!!
i mean wha? wha? wha? wha??
im feelin so left out coz i dont have anything original to say!! but mera ek ganda wala marne ka bahut mann kar ra hai...so here i go...ek latest ghatiya movie se churaya hua mera 1 liner:-
" santara andar se kabhi sakht nai hota...aur kisi ki maarne ka koi waqt nai hota" :P
ill b back wen i can think of more gande walez!! ;)
Gonecase: Meri poem se btr to tera sher tha:D Thanks!!
ReplyDeleteGeet: Abey kya bakwas jhaadi hai tune:P But anyways cheers:D
ReplyDeleteGunj: Babe your one-liner was the best! Which movie is it from? I think I've heard it...
ReplyDeleteकभी न सुन पड़ता, 'इसने, हा, छू दी मेरी हाला',
ReplyDeleteकभी न कोई कहता, 'उसने जूठा कर डाला प्याला',
सभी जाति के लोग यहाँ पर साथ बैठकर पीते हैं,
सौ सुधारकों का करती है काम अकेले मधुशाला। :))
Crazy:
ReplyDeleteShukriya shukriya :P
Teri poem bhi good hai :D
Geet:
Tera sher mujhe sher kam aur veer ras ki kavita jyada lag rahi hai !! Par tag to tujhe karna hi padega jhaansi ki raani :P
Gunj:
LOL, gud one, total cheap :P
DS: Ah Madhushala! Beautiful:-)
ReplyDeletehehe.thodi sharam aa ri hai batate hue but still...tune poocha hai to batana hi padega!!
ReplyDeleteits from one two three!! :P
This is blue bacardi pic is great! I'd once a similar pic as my wallpaper in my exams days to keep me motivated :))
ReplyDeletewhts ur fav drink, btw :-?
Gunj: Sharmane ki kya baat hai ghonchu, inni amazing line hai movie mein:D
ReplyDeleteDS: Yupp the pic is amazing. I use it as a desktop background too:-)
ReplyDeleteMy fave drink...hmmm...scotch I guess..and of course tequila shots:D
Well, itna bhi immature attempt nahi tha. You should have tried after talli, aur wadiya effect aata. :)
ReplyDeleteSince everyone is throwing dialouges take 1 more cheesy one from the flick One Two Three- :P
"Ek ball pe 2 chauke aur ek life mein 2 mauke kabhi nahi milte." :D
i am SHOCKED....
ReplyDeletei read the post and was trying to chipkao some shayari... but we are way ahead.
@crasiezt: poem total bundle thi...
the pic was amazing.
i am sure you were drunk when you wrote it!
@gonecase: *standing ovation*
maharaj... aapne toh fod diya matka.
ghalib bhi apne ghar ki chatt ke peeche waale kamre ki loo ke kone mein chup ke ro raha hoga...
@gunj: *standing ovation ka BAAP*
the santra one liner... embedded in my head...
i remember my friend's one liner for a very slutty chic back in college who decided to sleep with the whole universe except my friend...
"sabko baant-ti hai... mujhko daant-ti hai"
*by the way*
main yeh neeche waala sher choru kiya tha... ab aa hi gaya hai to chipka raha hun
kuch bhi bacha na kehne ko har baat ho gayi,
aao kahi sharaab piye ab raat ho gayi;
naksha utha ke koi naye shaher dhoondhiye,
ab to is shaher mai sabse mulakat ho gayi.
@gonecae again: tera ganda dimaag chal raha hoga is sher mein bhi...
@craziest
ReplyDeletei don't drink (yet) but my wish is to get dead drunk at least once in my life :D
@gonecase
abbe sher h ki gidad?
@sherry : matlab kya baat bol daali yaar ...Gidad buhahahaha
ReplyDelete@goneyyy : meri shayari vir ras ki ghatiya kavita hogi(waise main isse bhi acha attempt kar sakti hun :P ) ..per teri gidad??..fir se buhahahaha
@gunj : yaar ye pic dekhni padegi !!.too good lines hain :)..matlab bollywood mein goneyy dialouge writer bann sakta hai??
@crazy : abey ye bakwass goneyy ke liye jhaadi hai...main to isse bhi zayada ghatiya jhaadne waali thi ,per fir tera khyaal aa gaya :)
@drozzy : couldnt stop laughing on
ReplyDelete"sabko baant-ti hai... mujhko daant-ti hai" mast hai!!
Am feeling so proud of this poem I wrote...It's pretty silly, but it has set everybody's creative juices flowing:D
ReplyDeleteRohit: Good one man! Yupp should have been drunk, but if I was drunk I wouldn't be doing poetry...I have better things to "do"...lol
ReplyDeleteDrozzy: Hehehe kisi ne to sach bola ki poem bakwas hai:P
ReplyDeleteSaale if I was drunk I wouldn't be wasting my time writing...if you get my drift:D
Sher achcha tha, aur mere gande dimag ko samajh bhi aa gaya fatak se:D
And I salute your friend!! Kya jhakas line hai mamu:D
Sherry: LOL gidad:D
ReplyDeleteYou should definitely get drunk...it's awesome:-)
Geet: Kinna khayal hai tujhe mera:P
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ReplyDeleteKrazy:
ReplyDeleteoye ladki, achchi ni hai poem :(
(as discussed over the phone)
wasn't sure, what to write :)
Ha ha!
ReplyDeleteNice one, alcohol is good for you, go get high, higher!
Cheers to you too!!!
kahan maikhaaney pahuch gayi yaar..sab lage huey hain..chalo main bhi apna haath saaf kar leti hu..
ReplyDeletedaaru peena hai bekaar
usse aati hain sirf dakaar!
I really enjoyed reading your post and more than that the comments, i didnt know yahan shero-shayari ki mehfil chal rahi hai. Anwyays I have no contribution to make as I suck at it, but I am absolutely in love with the Bacardi pic, good one babes.
ReplyDeleteso Cheers n have a good one!!
i have a post written on daaru myself do check it out ;)ur pic is much better than mine :( :P
ReplyDeletewherez the tag?
ReplyDeleteChacha: Koi baat ni, tune sach bola and am impressed...grrrr...
ReplyDeleteExpress: LOL thanks babe!! Just had some:D
ReplyDeleteElusive: Tujhe dakaar ki padi hai...nashe ko bhool gayi..
ReplyDeleteAnvita: You enjoyed it? Am flattered girl:D
ReplyDeleteBut yes, the comments are much more interesting! And the pic is definitely intoxicating:D I have loads more...Cheers to you too:-)
Drozzy: Which one? That rotten thing? Will be up very soon...
ReplyDeleteElusive: You do? Lemme check then:-)
ReplyDeleteGonecase: Tere kehne pe I published the poem...aur dekh kinni shayari ho gayi uske karan!!
ReplyDeleteThat's a brown-out!
ReplyDeleteI apologize this comment wont go for this post but about the comment you left on Gunj's blog--the one on her latest post.awesome it was.Pleasure to witness originality at its best.Keep rocking
ReplyDeleteSolitaire: :D
ReplyDeleteMishra: Wow man! That was flattering:D Thanks!
ReplyDeleteAnd keep visiting:-)
Well that was quite an interesting post. Well i don't drink.. But all the comments have successfully motivated me to venture out with it.
ReplyDelete:P
Anyways nice post..
Here's to a long life and a merry one
ReplyDeleteA quick death and an easy one
A pretty girl and an honest one
A cold beer and another one!
@crasiezt yeah the comments r line nehle pe delha types hehe
ReplyDelete@anonymous thats a pretty good one too
Big Omi: Oh yes you should totally try!!
ReplyDeleteAnonymous: Am intrigued beyond words, and pretty impressed too! Who are you????
ReplyDeleteAnvita: Yeah babe totally! Such brilliant responses on a hopeless post...lol
ReplyDeleteone mo'
ReplyDeleteAlcohol may be man's worst enemy , but bible says love your enemy.
hey nice post......thanks 4 giving an idea of how a poem can b written....coz i suck in tat big time....
ReplyDeletekaun kehta ki kambakth daru chadti hai.... chadte toh hum hai huzur, daru toh sirf chadne ka bahana hai...
ReplyDeletehehe...
:D
Drink more, enjoy more... but dont be on a high like me... :P
High on D Highway!!! :P
hehehe
waise its a nice read!!!
Cheers!!!
heyaa
ReplyDeletelolzz
well alcohol has that effect on you
i can see that makes u all emotionally high
:D:D
nice one!!!
cheers
yet another drunk blogger!:-))
ReplyDeleteget a new post on.... its been long
ReplyDeleteAapka bacardi hangover abhi tak hai?
ReplyDeleteSab thik toh hai?
Kuch likhte kyun nahi. :P
koun kehta hai kambhaqt sharab mein nasha hota hai..
ReplyDeletenasha sharab mein hota toh naachti botal...
here goes another Everest mountaineer on her expedition to moon!!
ReplyDeleteCarry on please..
hee hee
Anony: Good one again! *that is if you're the same anony*
ReplyDeleteNirmal: Thanks for the compliment man! But am no good either:D
ReplyDeleteFreesherry: Sorry babe couldn't make it to your party:-( Am sure it musta been great:D
ReplyDeleteAnkur: Wah wah! LOL good line man!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks!
Welcome here! Keep dropping by:-)
Aditi: LOL the comments have been so good...I should write another crappy poem to get such a response:D
ReplyDeleteEkta: Yep:D
ReplyDeleteDrozzy: Yeah yeah...dekh le naya post:P
ReplyDeleteSutta: New name eh Rohit! There's a new post now, check it out:D
ReplyDeleteRockhard: Cha gaye tussi:D Aaj yahan kaise yogi ji?
ReplyDeleteWelcome by the way:-)
Friendly: Went to the moon and back. It's Friday, so am all geared up for another trip:D
ReplyDeleteHehehe.. yeah cool. And cheers.. Good one!
ReplyDeleteOhh btw.. dont know how popular it is in ur gang.. try vodka with redbull.. its supposed to be a depressant mixed with a Energy drink.. Works wonders :-)
Smokin: Thanks:-)
ReplyDeleteI've tried a cocktail that had Red Bull, Vodka and some other stuff. Loved it. Was bloody strong!
:D
ReplyDeleteI likey nevertheless...
crazy one from crazy girl :P
Skeety: Thank you ji:-)
ReplyDeletetake it neat... true.. why mix it to waste the taste :) man, this should be antehr of all those who likes booz... :)
ReplyDeleteXH: Do you drink alcohol? I guess you do:-) Cheers, whether you drink or not!
ReplyDeleteWelcome here and keep visiting!
lol! creativity on an all time high :D
ReplyDeleteBusy: I was high, but creativity was on an all time low:D
ReplyDeleteWelcome here!
Oh ! Finally tujhe reply karna yaad aa hi gaya :|
ReplyDeleteAur ye sab to tera talent, teri fan following hai...wo kya kehte hain, mehfil ka asar hai, aapki jo thehri :P
Gonecase: Meri fan following...ghanta! Sab tere nakshe kadam pe chal kar shayari kar rahe hain:P
ReplyDeleteBTW I replied ages ago...tune der se dekha:-(
Arre nakshe-kadam mere sahi, hain to tere hi chahne wale na :P
ReplyDeleteTujhe impress kar rahe the sab log:P
ReplyDeleteHain ? tere blog pe tere liye shayari maar ke mujhe impress kar rahe the ?? Re chori, bawli ho gyi sai ke :P
ReplyDeleteCheers!
ReplyDeleteDive into the Booze.
Rock on!
Yahi to chaal hai sab ki. I'll think it's for me and actually it's for you. Ek teer se do nishan. Main bhi khush aur tu bhi impressed:D
ReplyDeleteRex: Cheers! *dives into a pool of scotch*
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my page:-)
dont u say it all too?? ;)
ReplyDeletePri: Yeah I do:P
ReplyDeleteLove the photograph..... makes me wanna go and take a few shots!! And...Its weekend already ....
ReplyDeleteAkshay: I hope you got the shots:-)
ReplyDeleteI'm in love with the pic too:D
Welcome to my page!