Little Girl
Author: crasiezt
Sparkling sand moulded into a grand castle
Waves gleaming in the golden sun
And a little boy in red shorts.
A chick in a black bikini
Slathering sunblock all over her long sexy legs
Making sure no spot remains
And a cutie drools.
A little girl picking up grains of the pristine sand
Tossing the shiny diamonds into the water
The waves washing her face
Dissolving her tears…
She is drawing the sun
Making a big smile on its face
Fighting back fresh tears
Glistening with joy.
Ohho ! Desi beach ....Kya baat hai kya baat hai :P
Par waise ek baat bata, ye chicks se obsession kya hai tera, har jagah sexy factor ghusa deti hai ?????
Good one waise, ek baar fir....progress progress, ehehehe !!
Why the little one is crying?
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on Randomness at its best took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
Joyful post :)
do visit me too.
samajh aata to kuch comment karti main!!
abhi i just cant picture it!!
different peopel on the beach-- well, i could almost picture all of them there!!
ya paint an awesum pic with ya words!
btw just in case u dint notice..i tagged ya!
I feel like Goa reading this post....
BTW nice one, glad that u updated yur blog after a while eh
abbey mujhe lagta hai tere mein isse bhi zayada talent hai,likhne ka ...i just know it!!!
but this poem is nice,good observation..but why the little girl is crying??
HUGS :-)
@goneyy lol @ye chicks waala obsession.
crazy mein vi yehi soch ri thi...
You surely can do tons better!
I agree with Gonecase, progress on the way! :)
This reminded me of something I had seen not-so-long ago along one of the konkan stretches
The sand was a salty white and the waves crashed on those million grains in a lacey froth. The beach was almost empty save for a little girl dressed in a white skirt and blue top. She stood there letting the waves lick her feet and smiled, as one would smile affectionately at the greeting of an excited puppy. The setting sun formed a Halo around her, making her almost ethereal.
I was wondering why she was on that beach all alone, when a body rose from the water. She was wearing a black bathing suit and as the the water glistened off her body, she reminded me of a mermaid with legs. She certainly did seem like she had sprung out of nowhere. She went to the little girl and hugged her and together the began walking away from me...
I dont know why this stayed with me for so long, but it did! And your word suddenly brought this memory rushing to my mind...
Its beautiful!
cute....
really random!!
no strings attached
I liked it yaar... but i am wondering ... why is the little one crying.. i dont like when kids cry :(
tell her to stop crying... :)
kewl... good one!!!
i can actually imagine it!!!
:)
good work!!!
Cheers!!!
Lovely, the end brought a smile to my face...
Becoming a fan of ur poetry,
You are too good u knw..
:-P
sounds like my emotions today...
beautiful yet sad. HUGZ!
Keshi.
good one.... i somehow feel that its about you..
thou if am weong i will be happy.. it had lotta emotions..
Tc.
Omi
typo- wrong*
Was the pisture complete?Well i think need not be.It is never necessary that all pictures should be perfect.There are no reasons for everything..
i liked the blog.
i beleive we have just sensed the tip of an ice berg.
waiting for more.
When u get time do visit MAN IN PAINTING...
i liked the way you have portrayed the diversity of beach
oye kaamini.... maine sarkar raj dekh li.. ab bolo kaise??
well after Oh-NO spoiler attack frm u...i started watching the movie and it sucked big time...it was So slow and boring... abhishek modern bhikhari ho gaya hai yaar..uska kuch karo.. nahin uske baalon ka kuch karo...
but then mazza nahin aaya..witin 20 mins of the movie, i stopped it and started watching it from the last to the start... i should say ..IT WAS AMAZING. the plot,death,plots,plot and lastly the boring govinda chants...
sab teri meherbaani hai ladki..;)
ok if i understood it right,then the last line is anti climax!!hehehe!!(ok ok no dirt thr!)
but yeah thrs this thing bout ur poems i noticed...they start on a fine note...mid way sadness dawns n when u think its gonna be a really sad n dreary ending,ur r taken by surprise by the positivity of the last line!!me likes tht!!a lot!
oh btw-now i hav a proof tht i actually read it!!hehe!
Gonecase: Look who's talking! All your stories revolve around sex..but that's OK! Maine babe ke baare mein thoda sa likh diya to problem ho gayi!!!
Thanks waise:D
Prakhar: She's a kid, and kids have don't need a reason to cry or laugh:P
Welcome here by the way!
Ray: Thanks a ton man! Will definitely give it some more thought!
Welcome to my blog..and do keep reading!
Sam: Thanks dude!
Will check out your page soon! Welcome to my space:-)
Gunj: LOL kya samajh ni aaya? It's so simple!!!
Doosron ki tarah complicated poetry hoti hi ni hai mere se:D
Rant: And you make me smile with your words:-) Thanks babe!
Gunj: Yes I did notice..which is why I said "Grrrrr" in the comment:P
Princess: Thanks girl!
Am so bloody busy that I'm replying to comments after a week..dunno when am gonna be able to update!!
Geet: Yaar poetry mein inna hi talent hai:-( I know I don't write poems too well, but phir bhi chaap deti hoon! Tereko pasand aayi, good hai phir:-)
Yaar bachhe to ainwe hi rote hain na:P
Geet: Oye koi obsession ni hai..ye to situation ki demand thi:D
Sutta: Hmmph!*sticks out her rather pink tongue*
Dude, am not a poet..this is all I can write!!
Beauty: Thanks for liking my poem:-)
I like your memory more than my poem though!!
Skeety: :-)
Friendly: Yeah it brings out the title of my blog so well:D Thanks!
Rahul: She did stop crying!! In the last stanza she overcame her desire to cry..
"...Fighting back fresh tears
Glistening with joy."
Happy now? :D
Ankur: Thanks man!
Express: It did? Am glad! Been long since you dropped by..busy eh?
And ahem! fan!!! I was about to get all happy, when i saw the ":P" smiley..and now I wonder if that was sarcasm!!
Keshi: Awwww what's up girl?
Omi: LOL how is it about me? Which of the characters is me there???
It's just a figment of my imagination:-)
Man: Yeah it ain't the complete picture..coz like you said it ain't needed all the time!
Thanks for visiting and all the praise too:-)
Will visit you sometime soon!
Ranjana: Thank you so much!
Thanks for dropping by here:-)
Geet: LOL ab se hamesha aisa hi karoongi:P *devilish cackle*
Echo: Yupp you did read it:D
I never really noticed that myself to be honest! I just writing and I stop only when am done..maybe my brain functions that way or something...
I need a beach holiday......abhi ke leye ..is poem se hi kaam chalana padega...
wowo u know..i simply loved those last lines ma'am!!
Fighting back fresh tears
Glistening with joy.
simply amazing!!!
Akshay: LOL! SO did you have fun at this beach:D
Samby: Shukriya!
Glad that you liked my scribbling:-)
oh si...Gracias Senora!!
heya this the first time im visitng ur blog n i totally loved it.... amazing poem...
rock on.. cio later
n chk my blog out when u can :p
achhi me accha laga :)
Errmm, no, not sarcasm, go get happy! ":-P" :-D
Yea, back home, pune kept me soo busy, just trying to cope up with collg and stuff now..
How ve u been?
Akshay: Tengo el placer :D
Harini: Hey welcome to my page girl! Will definitely check out your blog:-)
Thanks!
Samby: Thanks yaar:-)
Express: Oh you're back!! Did you update your blog then? Lemme check!!
I'm doing pretty good babe. How was the Pune stint?
And thanks for the happiness:D
hey..u described everything just fine..but why is the kid crying?? :O
or are u just trying to show how nature makes ur forget our sorrows?
and oh, thnx for the comment :)
Cheers
ChRiS
Ok..frankly I am not getting it..How many characters, who is doing what and why?
CRD: It's for you to interpret why the kid is crying:-)
Nitu: LOL that was actually a very simple poem!! Read it again and you'll see
fantastic pic.. two young minds heading on their own. one on a defensive way, other towards self destruction.
Spectator: Thanks! And Welcome here:-)