Hic...

Author: crasiezt




Another immature attempt at poetry...

Alcohol is bad

Says who?

How much do I care?

Mix it up

Take it neat

It’s divine

Red black or blue

Colours don’t matter

I just wanna get high!

I walk in a “straight line”

I say “I’m OK”

My eyes flutter

I see everything

I hear it all

But am drunk…Cheers!

 

88 Responses to “Hic...”

  1. Gonecase

    Ye poem padh kar mein itna inspire ho gya ki teri shaan mein ek sher likh daala....arz kiya hai

    Log kehte hain kambakht chicken kha, meri favorite dish to kekda hai....

    Log kehte hain kambakht chicken kha, meri favorite dish to kekda hai....

    kekda kha ke poem likhi hai, fir mat kehna ki ghalib bewda hai

    wah wah wah wah....


  2. geet

    hic hic ...it is divine :)

    cheers babe!!!

    goneyyy :wah wah..yaar ye sher mein PJ ko kya bolte hian???


  3. geet

    meri taraf se bhi ek sher coz of my prev comment to goneyy

    goneyy aur 'yaar'? ..naaa
    hamare beech hai 'cold war'

    TAG ka sahara lekar
    kiya hai isne hum per ghrahanit prahaar!!!


  4. gunj

    lol lol lol
    @ ur poem, sidz comment & icing on d cake...geetz comment :P
    tum teeno ne kya kaha hai...wah wah wah wah!!
    i mean wha? wha? wha? wha??

    im feelin so left out coz i dont have anything original to say!! but mera ek ganda wala marne ka bahut mann kar ra hai...so here i go...ek latest ghatiya movie se churaya hua mera 1 liner:-
    " santara andar se kabhi sakht nai hota...aur kisi ki maarne ka koi waqt nai hota" :P

    ill b back wen i can think of more gande walez!! ;)


  5. crasiezt

    Gonecase: Meri poem se btr to tera sher tha:D Thanks!!


  6. crasiezt

    Geet: Abey kya bakwas jhaadi hai tune:P But anyways cheers:D


  7. crasiezt

    Gunj: Babe your one-liner was the best! Which movie is it from? I think I've heard it...


  8. DS

    कभी न सुन पड़ता, 'इसने, हा, छू दी मेरी हाला',
    कभी न कोई कहता, 'उसने जूठा कर डाला प्याला',
    सभी जाति के लोग यहाँ पर साथ बैठकर पीते हैं,
    सौ सुधारकों का करती है काम अकेले मधुशाला। :))


  9. Gonecase

    Crazy:
    Shukriya shukriya :P
    Teri poem bhi good hai :D

    Geet:
    Tera sher mujhe sher kam aur veer ras ki kavita jyada lag rahi hai !! Par tag to tujhe karna hi padega jhaansi ki raani :P

    Gunj:
    LOL, gud one, total cheap :P


  10. crasiezt

    DS: Ah Madhushala! Beautiful:-)


  11. gunj

    hehe.thodi sharam aa ri hai batate hue but still...tune poocha hai to batana hi padega!!
    its from one two three!! :P


  12. DS

    This is blue bacardi pic is great! I'd once a similar pic as my wallpaper in my exams days to keep me motivated :))
    whts ur fav drink, btw :-?


  13. crasiezt

    Gunj: Sharmane ki kya baat hai ghonchu, inni amazing line hai movie mein:D


  14. crasiezt

    DS: Yupp the pic is amazing. I use it as a desktop background too:-)

    My fave drink...hmmm...scotch I guess..and of course tequila shots:D


  15. rOhit

    Well, itna bhi immature attempt nahi tha. You should have tried after talli, aur wadiya effect aata. :)

    Since everyone is throwing dialouges take 1 more cheesy one from the flick One Two Three- :P

    "Ek ball pe 2 chauke aur ek life mein 2 mauke kabhi nahi milte." :D


  16. dRoZzY!!!

    i am SHOCKED....
    i read the post and was trying to chipkao some shayari... but we are way ahead.
    @crasiezt: poem total bundle thi...
    the pic was amazing.
    i am sure you were drunk when you wrote it!

    @gonecase: *standing ovation*
    maharaj... aapne toh fod diya matka.
    ghalib bhi apne ghar ki chatt ke peeche waale kamre ki loo ke kone mein chup ke ro raha hoga...

    @gunj: *standing ovation ka BAAP*
    the santra one liner... embedded in my head...

    i remember my friend's one liner for a very slutty chic back in college who decided to sleep with the whole universe except my friend...
    "sabko baant-ti hai... mujhko daant-ti hai"

    *by the way*
    main yeh neeche waala sher choru kiya tha... ab aa hi gaya hai to chipka raha hun


    kuch bhi bacha na kehne ko har baat ho gayi,
    aao kahi sharaab piye ab raat ho gayi;
    naksha utha ke koi naye shaher dhoondhiye,
    ab to is shaher mai sabse mulakat ho gayi.

    @gonecae again: tera ganda dimaag chal raha hoga is sher mein bhi...


  17. freesherry

    @craziest
    i don't drink (yet) but my wish is to get dead drunk at least once in my life :D

    @gonecase
    abbe sher h ki gidad?


  18. geet

    @sherry : matlab kya baat bol daali yaar ...Gidad buhahahaha

    @goneyyy : meri shayari vir ras ki ghatiya kavita hogi(waise main isse bhi acha attempt kar sakti hun :P ) ..per teri gidad??..fir se buhahahaha

    @gunj : yaar ye pic dekhni padegi !!.too good lines hain :)..matlab bollywood mein goneyy dialouge writer bann sakta hai??

    @crazy : abey ye bakwass goneyy ke liye jhaadi hai...main to isse bhi zayada ghatiya jhaadne waali thi ,per fir tera khyaal aa gaya :)


  19. geet

    @drozzy : couldnt stop laughing on
    "sabko baant-ti hai... mujhko daant-ti hai" mast hai!!


  20. crasiezt

    Am feeling so proud of this poem I wrote...It's pretty silly, but it has set everybody's creative juices flowing:D


  21. crasiezt

    Rohit: Good one man! Yupp should have been drunk, but if I was drunk I wouldn't be doing poetry...I have better things to "do"...lol


  22. crasiezt

    Drozzy: Hehehe kisi ne to sach bola ki poem bakwas hai:P
    Saale if I was drunk I wouldn't be wasting my time writing...if you get my drift:D

    Sher achcha tha, aur mere gande dimag ko samajh bhi aa gaya fatak se:D

    And I salute your friend!! Kya jhakas line hai mamu:D


  23. crasiezt

    Sherry: LOL gidad:D
    You should definitely get drunk...it's awesome:-)


  24. crasiezt

    Geet: Kinna khayal hai tujhe mera:P


  25. chacha

    This comment has been removed by the author.


  26. chacha

    Krazy:

    oye ladki, achchi ni hai poem :(
    (as discussed over the phone)

    wasn't sure, what to write :)


  27. Express

    Ha ha!

    Nice one, alcohol is good for you, go get high, higher!

    Cheers to you too!!!


  28. elusive

    kahan maikhaaney pahuch gayi yaar..sab lage huey hain..chalo main bhi apna haath saaf kar leti hu..

    daaru peena hai bekaar
    usse aati hain sirf dakaar!


  29. Anvita

    I really enjoyed reading your post and more than that the comments, i didnt know yahan shero-shayari ki mehfil chal rahi hai. Anwyays I have no contribution to make as I suck at it, but I am absolutely in love with the Bacardi pic, good one babes.
    so Cheers n have a good one!!


  30. elusive

    i have a post written on daaru myself do check it out ;)ur pic is much better than mine :( :P


  31. dRoZzY!!!

    wherez the tag?


  32. crasiezt

    Chacha: Koi baat ni, tune sach bola and am impressed...grrrr...


  33. crasiezt

    Express: LOL thanks babe!! Just had some:D


  34. crasiezt

    Elusive: Tujhe dakaar ki padi hai...nashe ko bhool gayi..


  35. crasiezt

    Anvita: You enjoyed it? Am flattered girl:D
    But yes, the comments are much more interesting! And the pic is definitely intoxicating:D I have loads more...Cheers to you too:-)


  36. crasiezt

    Drozzy: Which one? That rotten thing? Will be up very soon...


  37. crasiezt

    Elusive: You do? Lemme check then:-)


  38. crasiezt

    Gonecase: Tere kehne pe I published the poem...aur dekh kinni shayari ho gayi uske karan!!


  39. Solitaire

    That's a brown-out!


  40. Mishra

    I apologize this comment wont go for this post but about the comment you left on Gunj's blog--the one on her latest post.awesome it was.Pleasure to witness originality at its best.Keep rocking


  41. crasiezt

    Solitaire: :D


  42. crasiezt

    Mishra: Wow man! That was flattering:D Thanks!
    And keep visiting:-)


  43. BIG Omi

    Well that was quite an interesting post. Well i don't drink.. But all the comments have successfully motivated me to venture out with it.
    :P

    Anyways nice post..


  44. Anonymous

    Here's to a long life and a merry one
    A quick death and an easy one
    A pretty girl and an honest one
    A cold beer and another one!


  45. Anvita

    @crasiezt yeah the comments r line nehle pe delha types hehe

    @anonymous thats a pretty good one too


  46. crasiezt

    Big Omi: Oh yes you should totally try!!


  47. crasiezt

    Anonymous: Am intrigued beyond words, and pretty impressed too! Who are you????


  48. crasiezt

    Anvita: Yeah babe totally! Such brilliant responses on a hopeless post...lol


  49. Anonymous

    one mo'

    Alcohol may be man's worst enemy , but bible says love your enemy.


  50. Nirmal's Blog

    hey nice post......thanks 4 giving an idea of how a poem can b written....coz i suck in tat big time....


  51. freesherry

    hey!
    I am holding a little party in my shoutbox tomorrow
    A great way to have fun and get to know other bloggers.. food, booze, dance and loads and loads of gappein :D
    for oodles of masti and bucketsful of fun be there!!!
    for timings check my blog

    http://sherryrowl.blogspot.com/

    and yes, invite as many of your blogger friends as you can..
    spread the word!!!
    hope to see you guys in my shoutbox tomorrow!!
    take care :)
    love
    sherry


  52. Ankur

    kaun kehta ki kambakth daru chadti hai.... chadte toh hum hai huzur, daru toh sirf chadne ka bahana hai...
    hehe...
    :D

    Drink more, enjoy more... but dont be on a high like me... :P
    High on D Highway!!! :P
    hehehe

    waise its a nice read!!!
    Cheers!!!


  53. Aditi ''Jiggs''

    heyaa

    lolzz
    well alcohol has that effect on you
    i can see that makes u all emotionally high
    :D:D

    nice one!!!

    cheers


  54. Ekta

    yet another drunk blogger!:-))


  55. dRoZzY!!!

    get a new post on.... its been long


  56. Sutta

    Aapka bacardi hangover abhi tak hai?
    Sab thik toh hai?
    Kuch likhte kyun nahi. :P


  57. R O C K H A R D

    koun kehta hai kambhaqt sharab mein nasha hota hai..
    nasha sharab mein hota toh naachti botal...


  58. Friendly nextdoor guy

    here goes another Everest mountaineer on her expedition to moon!!

    Carry on please..

    hee hee


  59. crasiezt

    Anony: Good one again! *that is if you're the same anony*


  60. crasiezt

    Nirmal: Thanks for the compliment man! But am no good either:D


  61. crasiezt

    Freesherry: Sorry babe couldn't make it to your party:-( Am sure it musta been great:D


  62. crasiezt

    Ankur: Wah wah! LOL good line man!
    And thanks!

    Welcome here! Keep dropping by:-)


  63. crasiezt

    Aditi: LOL the comments have been so good...I should write another crappy poem to get such a response:D


  64. crasiezt

    Ekta: Yep:D


  65. crasiezt

    Drozzy: Yeah yeah...dekh le naya post:P


  66. crasiezt

    Sutta: New name eh Rohit! There's a new post now, check it out:D


  67. crasiezt

    Rockhard: Cha gaye tussi:D Aaj yahan kaise yogi ji?
    Welcome by the way:-)


  68. crasiezt

    Friendly: Went to the moon and back. It's Friday, so am all geared up for another trip:D


  69. Smokin Joe

    Hehehe.. yeah cool. And cheers.. Good one!

    Ohh btw.. dont know how popular it is in ur gang.. try vodka with redbull.. its supposed to be a depressant mixed with a Energy drink.. Works wonders :-)


  70. crasiezt

    Smokin: Thanks:-)
    I've tried a cocktail that had Red Bull, Vodka and some other stuff. Loved it. Was bloody strong!


  71. Reeta Skeeter

    :D
    I likey nevertheless...
    crazy one from crazy girl :P


  72. crasiezt

    Skeety: Thank you ji:-)


  73. --xh--

    take it neat... true.. why mix it to waste the taste :) man, this should be antehr of all those who likes booz... :)


  74. crasiezt

    XH: Do you drink alcohol? I guess you do:-) Cheers, whether you drink or not!

    Welcome here and keep visiting!


  75. ♥bμşγ-ŵŗϊŧēŕ♥

    lol! creativity on an all time high :D


  76. crasiezt

    Busy: I was high, but creativity was on an all time low:D
    Welcome here!


  77. Gonecase

    Oh ! Finally tujhe reply karna yaad aa hi gaya :|
    Aur ye sab to tera talent, teri fan following hai...wo kya kehte hain, mehfil ka asar hai, aapki jo thehri :P


  78. crasiezt

    Gonecase: Meri fan following...ghanta! Sab tere nakshe kadam pe chal kar shayari kar rahe hain:P
    BTW I replied ages ago...tune der se dekha:-(


  79. Gonecase

    Arre nakshe-kadam mere sahi, hain to tere hi chahne wale na :P


  80. crasiezt

    Tujhe impress kar rahe the sab log:P


  81. Gonecase

    Hain ? tere blog pe tere liye shayari maar ke mujhe impress kar rahe the ?? Re chori, bawli ho gyi sai ke :P


  82. Rex Venom

    Cheers!
    Dive into the Booze.
    Rock on!


  83. crasiezt

    Yahi to chaal hai sab ki. I'll think it's for me and actually it's for you. Ek teer se do nishan. Main bhi khush aur tu bhi impressed:D


  84. crasiezt

    Rex: Cheers! *dives into a pool of scotch*
    Welcome to my page:-)


  85. Pri

    dont u say it all too?? ;)


  86. crasiezt

    Pri: Yeah I do:P


  87. Akshay

    Love the photograph..... makes me wanna go and take a few shots!! And...Its weekend already ....


  88. crasiezt

    Akshay: I hope you got the shots:-)
    I'm in love with the pic too:D

    Welcome to my page!


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